Angela Lister, of Oklahoma City, and Haydn Kirkpatrick, of Edmond, have won this year’s second annual Newspaper Blackout Poetry contest.
The winners and runners-up will be featured in an upcoming video on NewsOK.com reciting their poem set to music by a local band. Call it a "blackout poetry slam.”
Lister, 54, won a $100 gift card in the adult category for her description of a budding romance, and Kirkpatrick, 13, won in the youth category for a poem about how good teaching "catches fire.” Kirkpatrick won an iPod Nano. Runners-up will receive T-shirts or hats from The Oklahoman
The winning entries, according to Austin Kleon, who popularized the contest concept, alter the original article from which they are created, taking the subject matter and changing it into a completely different and compelling message.
First place, adult Angela Lister, 54, Oklahoma City
They’ll meet tonight
Both have rebounded from a break
Both must avoid a letdown
But he came back for her hand
Kleon’s comments: "The best blackout poems completely transform the original article — this author took an article about basketball and repurposed words like ‘rebounded’ and ‘break’ into a love poem. I love the repetition of the word ‘Both’ to establish a kind of rhythm, and I love the way the poem tells a little story. Good stuff.”
First place, youth (younger than 21) Haydn Kirkpatrick, 13, Edmond
The best teaching
Always happy to oblige in a lesson
For showing the way
An extremely intelligent trick
An excellent educational tool
A mixed breed
A part of the fire for years
Kleon’s comments: "Again, when it comes to blackout poems, it’s all about the transformation.